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[The Lawn Gnome from Hell]

yes this is a little better

its the reviewer's job to tell you how you can improve it... soo although this is better i think it would be more scary if you made the lawn knome not look like such a cartoon... put alot of detail into him and make him really scary... not so.. flat... you can if you try.. i know it.

[Daily Lives 4]

work on your voice overs

the animation was great but your sound levels are all over the place and people are slurring and shit. hard to make out what you are saying sometimes.

other than that it's cool

[L1F3 Shorts ep.15]

some advice for you

you might want to try this:

instead of drawing out your first panel and going from there..
First sit down and think about what funny thing you are going to make a movie about.. what are the people going to say.. that way you won't end up with 15 episodes of a flash movie that is NEVER FUNNY!!!!!!!!!!

DrDeath2k3 responds:

I actually wrote a script before hand. Sorry if you don't find them humorous.

[Return ofsome jedi part.1]

its cool........i guess

there are things you could touch up..

1. your script. I think you both said 3 things total. and they were dumb things at that "you failed me.... blah" put some thought into the story

2. the sliding lightsaber on the ground: too cheasy. make it go faster, at a different angle too, it looks too fake.

3. you are using flash. do some extra creative moves like throwing the lightsaber up in the air and flipping it behind your back Mid-Battle.

4. when you get over your stupid star wars fetish... come up with an original idea to base your person/flash movie on. imagine the possibilities...

[Skeleton opening]

so let me get this straight....

you showed us your flash opening that you made.... which is cool. but....... you should have had a movie to go along with it. no one actually *CARES* that you made this... unless theres something to back it up. make sence?

Brand-new-hero responds:

nah i knwo - it was gonan go in front of a vid i already published but never did - i jus thought people would enjoy the kinda chibi skeletor idea. nothin more than a piece of fun its nothing serious. my next big thing is coming sometime in teh summer.

[The Car]

the music killed the video

im sure you were sitting at home thinking.. hm... I see flash all the time with the SAME MUSIC, in which people run around, back and forth... so IM GONNA DO IT TOOOOO!!! but guess what. the music you chose made this even more dumb than it already was. it definetely was not funny.

Next: Whats with clay people always being dumbass blobs with no features about them? why dont you spend 30 minutes on your main character instead of 5 minutes. then maybe people will care.

Next: *sigh*........ what can be done with you? A guy gets run over by a car constantly... come on. can you not think of a real plot?

[Animator Bloodshed]

yea... you tried

you know what you should do. pull out all the stops. make your main character find a various assortment of weapons to kill the people with.. when he has two automatic guns it kinda gets boring... we "expect" him to kill everyone with ease... you should make us wonder... hm... what is he going to do with that bow and arrow? what is he going to do with that trash-can lid? what is he going to do with that clock face that he just ripped off of strawberry COCK. lol the more complex you make the battle the better it will be. (think about the worms games... more items = more fun)

[Everyday Life]

it didnt suck

it was good. but i only wish it was in english.

[NL: Waiting for Godot]

wow.. i'm baffled

the fact that you made a movie about this...... lets see... the plot buildup would be "here we are waiting...." and the climax would be.. "here he is...." sound dumb to you? well it fucking does to me too!!!!

daleoffworld responds:

Well, see... "Ah, here he is!" *is* the joke. If you've never read or seen or heard of the original play, this won't be funny at all. The play is ALL ABOUT the waiting... the characters hope and fret and discuss and philosophize and wait some more, and Godot NEVER shows up. So the (admittedly obvious) joke here is that Godot actually arrives, he's just running late because of various mundane reasons.

[21O'C-Street MovieTrailer]

im getting sick

nice graphics but im sorry... im getting really sick of clocks. can you not think of something more creative or have you signed your soul away to ONLY MAKE CLOCK MOVIES THE REST OF YOUR DULL EXISTANCE???? just a thought bozo.

StrangeClock responds:

Inside, we are all Clocks of some form. Even you, OutLandish. Even you.

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