end = death
you should have made it longer, whenever things are getting funny and then we see all black.. we pray that its not the end, and once it is, if its not long enough, you will hear about it. Its cool to make fun of how bad work can suck but you have to come up with more ideas than just those few people. what else sucks about the bookstore dont you have to clean and shit too? just make it longer with more ideas.
They come in installments of five... Did you check out the first episode?
really bad
i agree that you are 'getting there' with it.. you are at least trying but #1 practice drawing all day at school so you will get better at drawing in the future... #2. dont use shitty music loops found on newgrounds.... we have all heard them before.... make your own or just use good songs from bands and the radio. also.. speed it up.. we dont care to see kirby walking and then wave to us and then keep walking.., think about your movies before you make them.
thats it
dude fuck these idiots.
people didnt understand the humor in this at all but i did so just leave it to say that you cant please everyone. This was good if you would have ended the cartoon after the evil guy talking then yea i would have said it sucked but you built up a story and shit. also the mountain dew commercial spoof was hillarious. dont listen to these fools, they are only 13 years old and only like shit coming out of stick men's asses. this is a great movie and dont fuckin stop making them.
Ha. We totally feel the same way you do about these dumb ass kids. I think it's just sad that they can't understand good comedy and storylines with substance. It's good to hear that somebody got the whole mountain dew thing. Thanks for the review though, it makes us feel better to know that there actually are some intelligent people that come to this site.
um neat picture
but dumb flash movie, who really cares about what we choose to exist you just wanted to show off your art.... doesnt make a good flash movie though nice try.
Opinion Opinion. Np though.. thanks for your time.
pretty humorous
Ralph, ralph, ralph, ralph, ralph!!! do you like me? LOL thats hillarious. good originality, you know what you should do now? choose a new subject and do a whole nother set on those things. like you had alot of 'rock' jokes in this one, maybe next time you could pick some other object and do those?? like 2 pieces of paper lol i dont know just ideas. dont stop making ideas become reality
kinda neat
good graphics but my little sister would have enjoyed watching this more than i would this belongs on nick jr. lol!
...All i want to do is beat pengin til he is bloody with a golf club. damn fat hole in one piece of shit he is!
cute though really.....
dont put (beta) just to sound cool
especially when your cartoon is so humiliating
alright, i don't know what part of your review to tackle first, the actual review or the person who wrote it?
#1 i didn't put "(beta)" to make it sound cool, i put it there to make a point that it was incomplete, dumbass, which leads me to #2 wouldn't a BETA release of an animation be humiliating? i mean, it's not like "OMFG, BETA", it's like "hmmm, yes, beta, i would like to help improve this submission"
Don't waste your fucking breath on me you jackass. I don't normally speak to anyone like this, but your head must be a brick, and needs a jackhammer to explain things to you.
If you don't like what i have said, email me: ralph.mail@gmail.com
I'll be glad to settle any problems you didn't understand about the REAL animation world. Because, obviously, Newgrounds is probably the only animation world youve encountered, youve never actually met and animated with professional animators, because it really sounds, and looks, like all you have is the final product you bias yourself with.
ok good try
i liked how you made him see ahead of time the enemy's attacks. However there is no way he could have known. next movie you make you should show some way for him to know people are coming and not have it all happen so fast. If you show US first that someone is coming it will make us anticipate "How the hell is he going to get out of this one?" try coming up with new ideas, not just hiding above the elevator that has been done before.
Which part are you talking about? because the part i think your talking about he just had really fast reflexes or he heard him coming.
it was ok
there were things you could have done to make it better.
1. dont do voice overs over the phone!
2. know what you are saying before you say it so you dont sound like you are reading your line.
3. stop being obsessed with ff7, theres new ones out!
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